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good luck!

i usually hate ambient songs, but this is amazing. i love the synths! the drums are just right! makes me feel like i'm in the dark, scared, depressed, and just thinking...good luck in the contest!!!

Tzunami responds:

Thanks, that's the exact sound I was going for.

good luck!

i liked it once it picked up at about 1:20. the train effect?! brilliant!!!! wish the song had been organized a little more. organized chaos is hard to pull off. good luck in the contest!

DoobyTimePiece responds:

thank ya thank ya BRILLIANT QHAHAHAHA

good luck!

love the metallic hits! i really feel like i'm trapped in an abandoned psychiatric hospital! way to set the ambiance! good luck in the contest!

3Fiddy responds:

Thanks

good luck!

the concept is scary! i just find it very treble-heavy. it makes is sound a tad 80s to me. but the discord and dissonance... NICE idea. organized chaos always makes for a scary song. and the orchestra hits were cool. good luck in the contest!

SessileNomad responds:

oh yeah i agree this is treble heavy, i dont generally write out bass melodies for piano stuff like this, but a couple of my other piano work actually does have bass in it

im lost when you say orchestra hits, cuzzzz...i didnt use any of those in the making of this, personally i dont think ill ever use them cuz they sound cheezy to me

thanks for the review

good luck!

omg, can't go wrong with an Egyptian sounding song...very badass...i can totally see this as movie music...to a zombie movie lol...makes me think of the opening theme to 28 days later. nicely done! i really like this! good luck!

Darkmaster603 responds:

Wow I never thought of it sounding Egyptian, but now that you say it it kinda does lol.
Thank you for the 10 and the review!

good luck!

i LOVED the first 40 secs! the beat is just enough...nice job on that! i didn't like the "farting" sounds that were here and there, the one at 1:03 is what i'm talking about. would have liked it without it. i loved the simple melody line! good luck in the contest!

CloudCannon responds:

lol yeah i know, i just wanted to do like, some distortion and put a pitch bend on it
didn't really work

but thank you though! ^_^

wowsers!

i really like this! the lyrics are drop dead for me amazing! the only things that threw me were the robotic voice....to me, a real voice with a metallic effect over it would be much more effective. and some of the synths were a little treble happy for me. i think it needs more on the bottom.
i like though, good job! i downloadededed its:D

NeonProject responds:

Haha, glad you like it.
I hope your still up for the Christams song :3
I haz idea!

<3!

omg...i love the guitar part! i'm not a huge fan of all the reverb on the vocals.the lyrics rock!the song needs something else...almost a light bell...it needs a little sum-sum lol. the beginning is gorgeous! a female voice probably isn't what you are looking for for this song but if you change your mind, i can harmonize:D i have a tenor range, so maybe i wouldn't sound too girly lol. well done! i downloaded it:D

Instinks responds:

ORLLY?
Lol that would be awesome xD i can make an instrmental if your serious lemme know.
Woot Download FTW!!!
Thanks for reviews :)

-=[Instinks]=-

worth more than a 5!!!!

man, that sucks....i agree, not much to back up giving you half a score lol. i'm really digging this..i really love the instrumentation...i wish it had a deeper bass....or just a little louder...i think if you really were on top of the drums...some heavier kicks....that would take this song to a whole new level! i'm really hearing prodigy in this...this song is pretty badass...would be almost cinematic with some drums!!! please work on it!!!! this song has so much potential, i hate to see it just sit as is!! i'm jealous!!!

CriticalHit responds:

I made this on the FL studio demo, so I kind of lost the file for it. >_> I might redo this sometime, because I got the full verson now.
Stay tuned.

recorded live?

is this you playing? there is some white noise it seems almost in the background...like a muddy recording...i wish there was a way to get a more clear sound...if it is you actually playing...my goodness gracious! good for you! you have a solid grasp of the ups, downs, and variations of composing music.....i hope you give serious thought to composing more....even as a career path :) i almost get a sense of running through the forest under a full moon...2:52 ish almost sounds a tad clair de lune to me....very cool! GREAT job on dynamics.....the song was not repetitive whatsoever but still all flowed well....that effect is hard to create.....you have to have talent to pull that off...well done! i almost wish a tad more was done with the left hand...the constant octaves were boring....and in parts i would have taken them down an octave..to really achieve that full, encompassed sound.....and brought them back up to the octave you were using for the lighter parts....well done:D

PenguinSam responds:

A bit muddy? That might be because I used a different file converter to get this to be an MP3.

And no, it is not me playing, although I would love to be able to play this song so badly. It is actually a Finale audio of the song using GPO sounds.

Also, if you could tell me which parts the octave work could use help on, that would be great!!!

Thanks for the review!!!!

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i'm kerrie, i'm 28, and have 2 beautiful boys, Camden and Garren. I love being a mom and wife. I also love cooking, shooting zombies, making inappropriate jokes at inappropriate times, cars, and karaoke.

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