zomgkerrie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[(NUB)Into The Fringe(NoVox)]

didn't think....

it was my thing! lol. but the drums are phenomenal! the rise and fal of the music really captures the attention of the listener. i can't wait to hear lyrics with this!!! nice work!
10'd 5'd and dl'ed

nubbinownz responds:

<3 <3

[~Inferno~]

i liked it!...

overall nice work! i just wish there would have been more ups and downs throughout the whole piece. it seemed frantic the whole song....there was no place you could build it up, it was already so intense. the drums seemed a tad loud but i liked the synths a ton.

DJAirWave responds:

Thanks, yeah I have to change the volume of the precussion, they are very overpowering. I usually posy my "Beta" songs on NG before I actually fine-tune it, which is most likely why they get such aweful ratings.

[[CE]-[Gates of Heaven]]

i <3 love stories:D

i really really like the gated chords. the note progression that you chose for them is gorgeous. they seem a tad repetitive. i wish there had been a middle section of maybe more technoey with a pretty piano melody line. i think that would tie the song together and add some variety. of some strings. and i was not a fan of the drums. they seemed WAY too crisp for such a pretty piece. Kristen is a lucky girl! no one ever wrote ME a song, lol :<

CompletedEmotion responds:

I wanted to add a piano, and I guess...never got around to it? Thanks for your review! I'll definatly look at some of that! God, I posted this song, 3 minutes ago! I forgot how quick NG is.

[Brainwashed[Test]]

badass

bad-ass funk is what i would call it. however, unfortunately no category for that here lol. did NOT like it around 1:57 mark. strings were a NO-NO!!!! otherwise, it seems very "oceans' eleven" to me...i woudl change up the drums a bit. and the tonality of the first synth-not a fan. i liked the one at around :45 mark. stick to the tone you set with the intro with a few simple, lower pitched synths....will work well i think. nice.

Instinks responds:

Haha thanks . I just was trying to keep it as not repetitive as possible :( lol but I'll take your advise first synth will be gone. second synth will be used more :P and i'll throw the strings away or you know use em better

-=Instinks=-

[H3On00b-T3CHN0]

nothing special

the melody is a very common loop....the song is just 2 loops together....no effort was made imo...could have added drums or a filter to really make it your own...

H3On00b responds:

yeah,it was garagebanded it wasnt very good cuz i dont know ANYTHING besides garageband,so yeah im so good unless i do my self instead of using a musical internet site so yeah i suck badly it would help if u would pm me and tell me some tips lol.Im making a new one so i hope it will be better so yaaaaaaaaaah..............

[He's going to be the...]

cinematic!!!

dude....this is like movie-trailer music. has a matrix feel to it. really gets you into it....builds and descends over and over, very nice! ending was disappointing. needs to end with more of an orchestral flair, imo. 10'd 5'd and dl'ed!!!!

Michael425 responds:

thanks. that's exactly what I was thinking, the ending was the hardest part for me.

[Shores of Hell]

liked it

loved the distortion synth in the beginning. once it hit mark 0:32 though, i would have hoped for a clear and more defined melody. it sounded very muddled and messy. the concept rocked, i think the distorted synth should stay for the first 30 seconds, really sets the tone. perhaps a heavier drum also. nice work!

TecHCrom3 responds:

aw, i know but i already uploaded it before i got better drums... so yea my newer song will have heaver drums.

ur x gurl friend *not really*
-TecHCrom3-

[Trapped Here]

fight scene for sure!!!

NICE job on conveying an upbeat, frantic sense of needing to escape..almost chaos....i felt pressured just listening to it lol. like i needed to get out....almost sounds a little pendulum to me. nice work

Bob-Music responds:

Pendulum, really? I personally don't hear it myself but I love pendulum so I'll take it as a compliment! :0D

[Rudy P. - Implosion (MAC8)]

impressed...

love love love the drums...my god...tell me how you did them! lol
i feel that the bass needs a sharper tone to it, it seems a tad too mellow for the impact that the drums set up....perhaps a few more snare rolls lead up to impact moments..feels like it needs a stronger kick...felt a tad empty...overall impressive work! if you ever get the chance, would love some feedback on some of the things ive submitted..i feel stuck and could use any help i could get:D

Fuiste responds:

Glad you liked the drums, they took the longest of any part of this song. I made them by using a distorted, compressed, and pitch raised sliced drum loop in the fruity slicer. I then added a kick and snare sample on top of that drum part to give those additional punch.

[Don't Give a Damn]

NICE!

Loved the style! definitely cinema-worthy imo. right around 1:15..i think you could turn it up a notch and go more techno with it...really make it bad-ass...

NemesisTheory responds:

thanks!

also if i technod it up halfway i think the whole feel would've been lost...
i wanted to keep it as a whole... if you want techno, there will be more of those songs coming in the future lol dont worry XD

thanks for the review!