i <3 you
you put a gorgeous piccolo melody in the beginning, backed with brass....very advanced of an idea...and it worked.(i play piccolo haha) i feel that more needs to be with the drums and the climaxing of the song. i'm a huge fan of timpanis and gongs and percussion in general. a timpani that crescendos into a big impact moment.....that would be so amazing. also at 1:22 mark, the piano melody is gorgeous, i would like a little triangle or chimes to add to the effect. i'm so far beyond impressed with your orchestration thus far. the ending could use much more of a grand finale in my opinion. nice work overall! i'm jealous!