nice balance
of the longing piano, and the deeper emotion of the lyrics and guitar. right on par with the singing as well! keep it up!
nice balance
of the longing piano, and the deeper emotion of the lyrics and guitar. right on par with the singing as well! keep it up!
<3!!
first of all, it's better than anything i could ever do.
2nd, i love it, but not a fan of the 1st 3 mins. but that's just me. i thinkt he intro sets it up to be the intensity you made it from 3:00 on til the end.
needs some bells or reverse cymbals or something, but i know it's still in progress. it's a great song, i just know its going to be even better!!! <3!
<3!!
Don't say that Kerrie, you'll get better, I know it! :3
LoL so even though you aren't a fan of the first 3 minutes, you think it fits well...you're awesome. :P
I have a reverse crash in there, usually accompanied by a crash or FXkick.
It will only get better! :3
Thanks for the review and support!!! <3!
nice work!
A+ on the vocals...love the sing that graduates into the scream...so emotional and raw there....lyrics are great....love the guitars....keep it up!
Your one of the few who get my vision, really appreciate it.
nice start!!!! :D
this seems a tad more hip-hop to me....but the driving synth in the beginning is nice. wasn't a fan of the beat....the drum actually has a pitch to it, which seems to conflict with the songs key, as well as the kick-it's a tad high, needs to be pitched down....i thought 1:29-end was cool! it was cool once it all layered!!! i think its way danceable if you work on the few pitch things..i think it will meld well. great first submission! <3 Kerrie
zomg *jams*
love the synths...man, this sounds like something i would have wanted to do! this is great! i love the darker tone to your instrument choices, and the drums actually have some variety to them...great song!
Thanks! I hope the recording is going well, I'm anxiously waiting for them to come.
could be sped up a tad....
but i really love the slower feel and heavy bass...sounds very badass....i call songs like this "songs i just want to put on my sunglasses and walk slowly in the dark like a bad-ass movie".....i think with some more tweaking, and variation on the drums and a few accent synths, this would fit morein the drum and bass category...i find the elements in the song effective.....has a full spectrum of sound....keep up the good work!
*zomgjams*
*chick-a
chick-a
shake booty
uh!*
man,you make me dance a fool! lol >.>
*zomgjams with Kerrie....for a third - but definitely not last - time* :D
I make you dance!!!! I make many people dance!!!! ;]
Thanks for stopping by Kerriez <3
to add...
i'm pretty sure kazmo built this from the ground up...i talk with him often and know that he puts alot of work and originality into his songs. another great song from a great musician!
another winner from penguinsam!
omg i feel like i'm out in the snow with snowflakes falling gently on my nose. great use on instrumentation!
i'm kerrie, i'm 28, and have 2 beautiful boys, Camden and Garren. I love being a mom and wife. I also love cooking, shooting zombies, making inappropriate jokes at inappropriate times, cars, and karaoke.
Age 40, Female
stay at home mom
lincoln, NE
Joined on 4/28/08