powerful!
the snare in the beginning was overpowering. once the synth came in at :35-rockin! i loved the chord progression! it was powerful! and i felt the tempo was just right! i felt it needed something a little more....a pad, something....in the lower range. this has a GREAT start! the synth melody at :35 is already stuck in my head! keep it up! 4/5 and 8/10!
Well, sweet thanks! Yeah, i agree, a pad would do nicely.
amazed, as always!
what fabulous instrumentation! full sound!
Dawn of no sun- beautiful melody and movement-perfect percussion-just enough! love the french horn and clarinet!
Stars through southern lights-love the underlying piano. i would have expected a lighter sound...more with strings and flutes and bells, but that just may be my liking. the string melody is quite nice. you were very successful creating "waves" of sound that paint the picture of waves of light.
The Iceberg-this was my favorite part of the piece!!!! love the timpani on this! what a beautiful concept to paint with music! i still may have wanted a little more with percussion-to really emphasize the crashing of the huge sheets of ice just cascading down and "exploding"....
First Sunrise- still felt like i needed more "high" sounds...flutes, oboes, bells, the "twinkling" of the sun rays peering thru the clouds....but again, i play flute, i may be biased :P
overall opinion- was a well-thought out piece of art. beautiful concept, well executed! and inspiring! well deserved 5/5 and 10/10! please, continue to make such lovely music!!!!
OOOOH! I love those ideas! They sounds simply wonderful! I would love to add stuff like that into my music!
Only problem is, my program doesn't like Vista so much, so I have to get it upgraded before even thinking about makeing a new audio of this song.
There are some ideas that I might pass on due to the image that I saw and the mood I wish to create, but the percusion in "The Iceberg" was a huge struggle for me, so I hear that comment to so surprise!
I am so happy that you like this piece so much!
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zomg!
MAN! you are really improving with every song! this is craziness!! i <3 it!
Wow... thatnks.
Strange thing is, I actually feel like I'm improving, loads and Loads, those Music Technology Classess must be paying off!
i'm here to save the day!...
i had to offset the 0 that asshole below me gave you...
zomg
loved it! nice full sound! great kick! it was the first hardstyle track that i've heard that actually was upbeat! it was a great listen! the melody line had interest, and good instrumentation choices.
I'm glad you commented on the instruments, I'm trying to use a wide range at the minute so I have a knowledge of what does what, so when I go back to my own style and can incoporate different stuff! :3
OMFG!!!!
OMFG I WANT TO PLAY LEFT4DEAD NAO!
you translated theme of the tank and the "franticness" of the game very well!
<3
nice!
i loved it til :32
once that detuned synth came in, i didn't think it fit well....
at 1:40-what an interesting break for jumpstyle music! loved that!
thanks, i agree with you, the detuned synth is kind of out of place in that song.
and 1:40 is my favorite part =]
thank you
gorgeous...
this sums up the heart for me....longing, inspirational, happy, sad....all in one!
beautiful piano part-the simplicity of it just really grabs the attention of the listener to me....
1:54 ftw.....nice synths!
the end was pretty and well done!
Thanks Kerrie! =D
The arp synth was a modified synth I made in Vanguard.
PS. Your vox work with Kazmo is made of win. Dunno how many times I've said that now. lol
<3!!!!
i think the intro needs a bit more....an underlying pad to fill in the gaps, perhaps...
1:11 rocked....sounded a little treble heavy---sounds very "middle" to me...i think some bells to accent would add to the starry atmosphere of the song...also i think the kick at the end is too punchy...but your basslines are making me jealous! lol. keep it up!!
nice structure!!! <3 for bass!
ok, i'm reviewing as i listen, here goes:
beg-:30...a little bare, once the bass comes in at :30, i'm loving it! full sound!
:55-the accent synths are perfect!
1:20-nice lead-in to this time marker...feels like it needs another melody line...
1:59-LOVE the new bass line melody...really is getting exciting now!~
2:20-i think this is my favorite part of the whole song....it doesn't sound empty..the beginning felt a tad empty...
3:00-end..i feel it needs a hi-hat to add to the excitement..now we are sounding empty agains....
overall impression: nice structure to the song...if you made this with FL, i beg you to help me learn it..that program is the bane of my existence lol.
Yea it was all on FL.
You can't have a song thats allways not "empty" as you suggested. you need these extended intros and parts where you only hear the bass alone. If not the Climax of the song doesnt stand out as much and the whole song just sounds like a mess with no begining middle and end. I can see where ur goin, but i dont think its a problem with this song :) rly glad you like it though =D
i'm kerrie, i'm 28, and have 2 beautiful boys, Camden and Garren. I love being a mom and wife. I also love cooking, shooting zombies, making inappropriate jokes at inappropriate times, cars, and karaoke.
Age 40, Female
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lincoln, NE
Joined on 4/28/08
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