zomgkerrie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[21 Angels]

ambient?

it's pretty, but perhaps a different category would suit it better! i'm sorry about your loss! it is a beautiful song, and i can tell how you feel through the song. i feel that the ending needs something more, and i feel definite power ballad in this...needs some drums, and vocals would go beautifully. if you write the vocals, perhaps i could help with the melody and even singing?? very nice song!

[[CE]-[Gates of Heaven]]

i <3 love stories:D

i really really like the gated chords. the note progression that you chose for them is gorgeous. they seem a tad repetitive. i wish there had been a middle section of maybe more technoey with a pretty piano melody line. i think that would tie the song together and add some variety. of some strings. and i was not a fan of the drums. they seemed WAY too crisp for such a pretty piece. Kristen is a lucky girl! no one ever wrote ME a song, lol :<

CompletedEmotion responds:

I wanted to add a piano, and I guess...never got around to it? Thanks for your review! I'll definatly look at some of that! God, I posted this song, 3 minutes ago! I forgot how quick NG is.

[Brainwashed[Test]]

badass

bad-ass funk is what i would call it. however, unfortunately no category for that here lol. did NOT like it around 1:57 mark. strings were a NO-NO!!!! otherwise, it seems very "oceans' eleven" to me...i woudl change up the drums a bit. and the tonality of the first synth-not a fan. i liked the one at around :45 mark. stick to the tone you set with the intro with a few simple, lower pitched synths....will work well i think. nice.

Instinks responds:

Haha thanks . I just was trying to keep it as not repetitive as possible :( lol but I'll take your advise first synth will be gone. second synth will be used more :P and i'll throw the strings away or you know use em better

-=Instinks=-

[H3On00b-T3CHN0]

nothing special

the melody is a very common loop....the song is just 2 loops together....no effort was made imo...could have added drums or a filter to really make it your own...

H3On00b responds:

yeah,it was garagebanded it wasnt very good cuz i dont know ANYTHING besides garageband,so yeah im so good unless i do my self instead of using a musical internet site so yeah i suck badly it would help if u would pm me and tell me some tips lol.Im making a new one so i hope it will be better so yaaaaaaaaaah..............

[He's going to be the...]

cinematic!!!

dude....this is like movie-trailer music. has a matrix feel to it. really gets you into it....builds and descends over and over, very nice! ending was disappointing. needs to end with more of an orchestral flair, imo. 10'd 5'd and dl'ed!!!!

Michael425 responds:

thanks. that's exactly what I was thinking, the ending was the hardest part for me.

[Crazy Heaven {Trance}]

nice!

good work for 2nd time on FL. the concept is really nice. i think it needs a heavier kick, ex-nay the hi-hat....i felt the song lacked a really good buildup....it seemed to build forever and ever until about 1:09 mark, and there was no climax...i would change the drums at that minute marker, and really go heavy and intense. that's just me though. but it's good! it inspires me to hear the different directions the song could be taken!

[Shores of Hell]

liked it

loved the distortion synth in the beginning. once it hit mark 0:32 though, i would have hoped for a clear and more defined melody. it sounded very muddled and messy. the concept rocked, i think the distorted synth should stay for the first 30 seconds, really sets the tone. perhaps a heavier drum also. nice work!

TecHCrom3 responds:

aw, i know but i already uploaded it before i got better drums... so yea my newer song will have heaver drums.

ur x gurl friend *not really*
-TecHCrom3-

[.:Kinky_Girls_Kiss:.]

omg

fantastic bass line! omg...i was hooked from the start. it sounded a bit muddled in a few places, but loved the variation in tone in the bass line. very badass...kudos to you!
10'd, 5'd, and dl'ed

[Trapped Here]

fight scene for sure!!!

NICE job on conveying an upbeat, frantic sense of needing to escape..almost chaos....i felt pressured just listening to it lol. like i needed to get out....almost sounds a little pendulum to me. nice work

Bob-Music responds:

Pendulum, really? I personally don't hear it myself but I love pendulum so I'll take it as a compliment! :0D

[Final Goodbye (EQ)]

this sums up...

...the feeling when you get when your heart hurts and you just need a sad song. beautiful....lyrics, vocals, melody, everything. amazing.